6.2.3 Upgrading writing Lesson Content Q&A 6.2.3 Upgrading writing 1 / 20 Which sentence would be most effective as the opening of a concluding paragraph in an argumentative essay? To conclude, the evidence strongly shows that school uniforms create a sense of equality. Another point is that some people dislike uniforms. Uniforms are in many schools and different places. I wore a uniform yesterday and it was fine. A concluding paragraph should signal closure and summarise the main point clearly. 2 / 20 Which is the best way to check that writing matches the required form, audience and purpose? Count the number of paragraphs only Use the longest words possible Check that tone, structure and language fit the task Remove all punctuation Writers should read back their work and consider whether the style suits the task and intended reader. 3 / 20 Which revision best improves the sentence The food was good? The food was acceptable. The food was rich and flavourful. The food was there. The food was food. Upgrading writing often means replacing bland vocabulary with more precise and expressive choices. 4 / 20 Which sentence is most suitable for a formal persuasive leaflet? Support the library by donating your unused books today. Books are kind of cool so maybe give some away. You should totally chuck old books there. Anyone can do whatever they want with books. The sentence should be direct, audience appropriate and clearly linked to the purpose of persuading. 5 / 20 Which paragraph opening is best for an informative report on school transport? Transport at school is a big deal for many people. There are buses and bikes and cars and walking. School transport affects punctuality, safety and travel costs for students. I once missed the bus and felt unhappy. An informative report should begin with a clear statement of the topic so the paragraph has a clear purpose. 6 / 20 Which word is the best replacement for said in this sentence He said the plan was impossible? talked wrote explained moved More precise reporting verbs can show the speaker's attitude or tone. 7 / 20 Which sentence best demonstrates careful grammar? The team are winning the match yesterday. The team won the match yesterday. The team winning the match yesterday. The team has win the match yesterday. Grammar should be correct so the meaning is clear and the sentence sounds polished. 8 / 20 Which improvement would best strengthen this paragraph opening During the holidays, many things happened? During the holidays, my family visited the coast, which gave us a chance to explore the area. During the holidays, many things happened, and they were nice. During the holidays, it was holiday time for everyone. During the holidays, stuff occurred. A better opening should signal the main focus of the paragraph instead of using a vague statement. 9 / 20 Which sentence contains the most precise adjective? The room was nice and tidy. The room was big and okay. The room was good and clean. The room was immaculate and orderly. Precise adjectives create a more accurate and vivid image than general ones. 10 / 20 Which is the best reason to vary sentence lengths in writing? It makes every paragraph the same. It removes the need for punctuation. It keeps the reader engaged and helps control pace. It means every sentence must be very long. A mix of sentence lengths can create rhythm, add emphasis and prevent writing from sounding repetitive. 11 / 20 Which sentence best matches a formal audience and purpose? Hey everyone, this school rule is totally unfair. Students are reminded that mobile phones must not be used during lessons. You guys need to stop using phones in class. Phone use in lessons is bad, obviously. Formal writing uses controlled language, clear structure and a tone suited to the reader. 12 / 20 Which revision makes this sentence more precise The dog moved quickly across the garden? The dog raced across the garden. The dog went across the garden. The dog travelled across the garden. The dog moved across the garden. Precise vocabulary often includes stronger verbs that show exactly how something happens. 13 / 20 Which sentence is punctuated correctly? Lets meet after school, to revise together. Lets meet after school to revise, together. Lets meet after school to revise together. Let's meet after school to revise together. Correct punctuation helps the reader understand where ideas begin and end. 14 / 20 Which paragraph opening best supports a persuasive speech about recycling? In addition, recycling reduces the amount of waste sent to landfill. Once, I saw a bottle on the pavement. However, the most effective reason to recycle is that it protects the environment. My neighbour has a blue bin outside his house. The opening should introduce the paragraph's purpose and link clearly to the argument being developed. 15 / 20 Which sentence is an example of generic vocabulary that should be improved? The athlete sprinted across the track. The thing was very good and made everyone happy. The librarian carefully sorted the books. The teacher explained the experiment clearly. Generic words are too broad and do not create a clear picture for the reader. 16 / 20 Which opening is most suitable for a letter of complaint? I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service I received yesterday. Guess what happened to me last night You will not believe this terrible story It was kind of annoying when things went wrong The opening should match the form, audience and purpose of the text, and a complaint should state the issue clearly and directly. 17 / 20 Why should a writer check spelling, punctuation and grammar carefully? To make the text longer To make every sentence complex To include more formal words To avoid confusion and present work clearly Accuracy helps the writing sound professional and prevents meaning from being misunderstood. 18 / 20 Which word is the most precise replacement for the word nice in this sentence The nice meal impressed the guests? good fine delicious pleasant Precise vocabulary gives the reader a clearer and more vivid idea than a vague word like nice. 19 / 20 Which sentence is the best example of varied sentence structure? The storm was strong. The storm was loud. The storm was dangerous. Although the storm was strong, the villagers stayed indoors, listening to the wind batter the windows. The storm was strong and the storm was loud and the storm was dangerous and the storm caused damage. Strong storm danger outside window loud rain wind Good writing often mixes short and longer sentences to keep the reader interested and to emphasise key ideas. 20 / 20 What is the best way to improve the opening of a paragraph in a formal article? Use a topic sentence that states the main idea clearly Start with a random fact that may not connect to the topic Begin with a long list of examples before the main point Repeat the same sentence opening as the previous paragraph A strong paragraph opening should clearly show the focus of the paragraph so the reader can follow the argument or explanation. 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2.2.3 Tone and voice 2.2.3 Tone and voice 2.2.3 Tone and voice (out) 2.2.3 Tone and voice (out) ***** 2.3 Structure methods ***** 2.3 Structure methods 2.3.1 Openings and introductions 2.3.1 Openings and introductions 2.3.1 Openings and introductions (out) 2.3.1 Openings and introductions (out) 2.3.2 Shifts and development 2.3.2 Shifts and development 2.3.2 Shifts and development (out) 2.3.2 Shifts and development (out) 2.3.3 Sentence structure and repetition 2.3.3 Sentence structure and repetition 2.3.3 Sentence structure and repetition (out) 2.3.3 Sentence structure and repetition (out) ***** 2.4 Overall effect and zoom-out sentences ***** 2.4 Overall effect and zoom-out sentences 2.4.1 Connecting to theme and message 2.4.1 Connecting to theme and message 2.4.1 Connecting to theme and message (out) 2.4.1 Connecting to theme and message (out) 2.4.2 Avoiding capped analysis 2.4.2 Avoiding capped analysis 2.4.2 Avoiding capped analysis (out) 2.4.2 Avoiding capped analysis (out) 3 Comparison skills ***** 3.1 Understanding comparison ***** 3.1 Understanding comparison 3.1.1 Comparison mindset 3.1.1 Comparison mindset 3.1.1 Comparison mindset (out) 3.1.1 Comparison mindset (out) 3.1.2 Comparison openings 3.1.2 Comparison openings 3.1.2 Comparison openings (out) 3.1.2 Comparison openings (out) 3.1.3 Balanced coverage 3.1.3 Balanced coverage 3.1.3 Balanced coverage (out) 3.1.3 Balanced coverage (out) ***** 3.2 Comparative paragraph structure ***** 3.2 Comparative paragraph structure 3.2.1 Text One evidence and analysis 3.2.1 Text One evidence and analysis 3.2.1 Text One evidence and analysis (out) 3.2.1 Text One evidence and analysis (out) 3.2.2 Transition to Text Two 3.2.2 Transition to Text Two 3.2.2 Transition to Text Two (out) 3.2.2 Transition to Text Two (out) 3.2.3 Text Two analysis 3.2.3 Text Two analysis 3.2.3 Text Two analysis (out) 3.2.3 Text Two analysis (out) 3.2.4 Comparative zoom-out 3.2.4 Comparative zoom-out 3.2.4 Comparative zoom-out (out) 3.2.4 Comparative zoom-out (out) ***** 3.3 Common comparison mistakes ***** 3.3 Common comparison mistakes 3.3.1 Avoiding separate essays 3.3.1 Avoiding separate essays 3.3.1 Avoiding separate essays (out) 3.3.1 Avoiding separate essays (out) 3.3.2 Avoiding vague comparison 3.3.2 Avoiding vague comparison 3.3.2 Avoiding vague comparison (out) 3.3.2 Avoiding vague comparison (out) 4 Transactional writing skills ***** 4.1 Purpose, audience and form ***** 4.1 Purpose, audience and form 4.1.1 Understanding the task 4.1.1 Understanding the task 4.1.1 Understanding the task (out) 4.1.1 Understanding the task (out) 4.1.2 Controlling tone and register 4.1.2 Controlling tone and register 4.1.2 Controlling tone and register (out) 4.1.2 Controlling tone and register (out) 4.1.3 Using source ideas 4.1.3 Using source ideas 4.1.3 Using source ideas (out) 4.1.3 Using source ideas (out) ***** 4.2 Transactional paragraph development ***** 4.2 Transactional paragraph development 4.2.1 Strong openings 4.2.1 Strong openings 4.2.1 Strong openings (out) 4.2.1 Strong openings (out) 4.2.2 Main benefit paragraph 4.2.2 Main benefit paragraph 4.2.2 Main benefit paragraph (out) 4.2.2 Main benefit paragraph (out) 4.2.3 Second benefit paragraph 4.2.3 Second benefit paragraph 4.2.3 Second benefit paragraph (out) 4.2.3 Second benefit paragraph (out) 4.2.4 Challenges and counterarguments 4.2.4 Challenges and counterarguments 4.2.4 Challenges and counterarguments (out) 4.2.4 Challenges and counterarguments (out) 4.2.5 Conclusions 4.2.5 Conclusions 4.2.5 Conclusions (out) 4.2.5 Conclusions (out) ***** 4.3 Rhetorical and stylistic control ***** 4.3 Rhetorical and stylistic control 4.3.1 Persuasive phrases 4.3.1 Persuasive phrases 4.3.1 Persuasive phrases (out) 4.3.1 Persuasive phrases (out) 4.3.2 Sentence variety 4.3.2 Sentence variety 4.3.2 Sentence variety (out) 4.3.2 Sentence variety (out) 4.3.3 Connectives and cohesion 4.3.3 Connectives and cohesion 4.3.3 Connectives and cohesion (out) 4.3.3 Connectives and cohesion (out) 5 Creative, narrative and descriptive writing skills ***** 5.1 Narrative writing ***** 5.1 Narrative writing 5.1.1 Narrative planning 5.1.1 Narrative planning 5.1.1 Narrative planning (out) 5.1.1 Narrative planning (out) 5.1.2 Openings and hooks 5.1.2 Openings and hooks 5.1.2 Openings and hooks (out) 5.1.2 Openings and hooks (out) 5.1.3 Building tension 5.1.3 Building tension 5.1.3 Building tension (out) 5.1.3 Building tension (out) 5.1.4 Endings 5.1.4 Endings 5.1.4 Endings (out) 5.1.4 Endings (out) ***** 5.2 Descriptive writing ***** 5.2 Descriptive writing 5.2.1 Choosing a focus 5.2.1 Choosing a focus 5.2.1 Choosing a focus (out) 5.2.1 Choosing a focus (out) 5.2.2 Sensory detail 5.2.2 Sensory detail 5.2.2 Sensory detail (out) 5.2.2 Sensory detail (out) 5.2.3 Structural movement in description 5.2.3 Structural movement in description 5.2.3 Structural movement in description (out) 5.2.3 Structural movement in description (out) ***** 5.3 Discursive writing ***** 5.3 Discursive writing 5.3.1 Building a balanced discussion 5.3.1 Building a balanced discussion 5.3.1 Building a balanced discussion (out) 5.3.1 Building a balanced discussion (out) 5.3.2 Argument development 5.3.2 Argument development 5.3.2 Argument development (out) 5.3.2 Argument development (out) 6 Exam performance and answer improvement ***** 6.1 Planning and timing ***** 6.1 Planning and timing 6.1.1 Reading questions carefully 6.1.1 Reading questions carefully 6.1.1 Reading questions carefully (out) 6.1.1 Reading questions carefully (out) 6.1.2 Planning longer answers 6.1.2 Planning longer answers 6.1.2 Planning longer answers (out) 6.1.2 Planning longer answers (out) ***** 6.2 Upgrading responses ***** 6.2 Upgrading responses 6.2.1 Upgrading analysis 6.2.1 Upgrading analysis 6.2.1 Upgrading analysis (out) 6.2.1 Upgrading analysis (out) 6.2.2 Upgrading comparison 6.2.2 Upgrading comparison 6.2.2 Upgrading comparison (out) 6.2.2 Upgrading comparison (out) 6.2.3 Upgrading writing 6.2.3 Upgrading writing 6.2.3 Upgrading writing (out) 6.2.3 Upgrading writing (out)